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MORE'S UTOPIA

Thomas More's Utopia is one of the defining works of the Renaissance period. During this
era, there was rampant change all over Eastern Europe. The failing governments were being
revamped into more democratic organizations and focus was placed on the community as
opposed to the dictator or monarch. Thus, the concept of an ideal society in which
citizens governed themselves and strove for the good of the community, such as that in
Utopia, seemed revolutionary. His book gained widespread notoriety among the humanists of
the Renaissance and to this day it continues to serve as a model of a perfect society. In
my opinion, however, it serves as only that…a model of a perfect society. Utopia is
simply a standard by which to compare all other societies by. I would venture to say that
More created it as an unrealistic ideal and not an actual goal to be attained. Based on
More's description of Utopia, I feel that a Utopian community is not possible.
The concept of a Utopia is simply not possible for a wealth of reasons, one of which is
the fact that humans are greedy. Not all people are greedy, but, as a whole, human beings
are greedy, that is, they always want more. Very rarely will there be a person that is
truly satisfied with the condition of his/her life. In More's Utopia, everyone is equal;
all people have the same amount of everything. Supposedly, this would prevent people from
wanting more. When everyone has the same amount everyone is satisfied, right? Wrong,
there is nothing to prevent people from wanting more than their ration of food, firewood,
or other resources. In a situation such as a drought where there is only a small amount
of a resource and a small ration is given to everyone, people will be that much more
likely to want more than their share. If all I'm getting for dinner is a slice of bread I
will want more regardless of the fact that everyone else is getting the same amount. This
might lead to me stealing someone else's ration, thus throwing off the delicate balance
of a perfect society. 
Furthermore, the desire for more is not limited to material things, such as food and
other resources but also entails the desire for more wealth, power, or higher social
standing. In a society with no class division and no wealth such as Utopia, therefore
there is nothing to strive for. When there are no goals, people will not work. Sadly,
there is no incentive for people to labor for the community when there is no prospect of
gaining anything for themselves. This will produce a community of apathetic, unmotivated
workers, which will eventually lead to the downfall of the Utopian society. 
Another issue that makes Utopia an unrealistic goal is the fact that in a perfect society
everyone would be equal. The concept of equality is incredibly idealistic and simply not
possible amongst a large group of people. By adding slaves to the model society, it is
obvious even More could not avoid class divisions. It is also human nature to put people
into groups, whether it is based on skin color, creed, status or education. Certain
groups would be admired, and conversely certain groups would be looked down upon. This
will create hostility and unrest amongst the citizens and will ultimately destroy the
model society. It was naive of Thomas More to think that humans could exist in a society
without ever creating social divisions. More would probably argue that without material
possessions and social division people would not make distinctions between each other.
However, I feel that people will create divisions among themselves, even if it must be
based on the most trivial of differences.
A Utopian society certainly sounds like a wonderful place, but is it a realistic place?
Most people would say no, including myself. Sadly, not too many people have enough faith
in human kind to ever see a community such as this one flourish. Several years ago, an
experiment in communal living was done on what is known as Brook Farm. This was supposed
to be a modern day Utopia however it failed miserably due to unrest among the people
living in the community. This proves that an ideal society can never exist, not because
people are greedy or need to make class distinctions but because people would be unhappy
in More's Utopia due to the lack of growth and progress both in society and individually,
thus making it an imperfect society. 
Bibliography
More, Thomas. Utopia